摘要:"Only by taking actions, such as recycling and reducing plastic, can we create a world where the sky is bluer and the rivers are c
家长们,您家孩子是否也这样?
✘ 作文总卡在"简单句"堆砌:"I think...""I like..."来回绕;
✘ 考试写不完,结尾潦草凑字数被扣分;
✘ 明明背了单词,作文一看还是"小学生水平"!
别慌!我带过300+初中生验证过——用好万能句式,作文至少提5分! 今天免费分享阅卷老师最爱的加分套路
秒杀衔接生硬 → 用过渡词串逻辑
普通版:"We should study hard. It is important."
魔鬼句式版:"Not only should we study hard, but it is also crucial for our future."
(过渡词让句子像齿轮咬合,流畅度飙升!)
碾压低级错误 → 规避语法雷区
孩子最爱写"I very like..."(错!),改用:
"What fascinates me most is that..."(高级+100%正确)
拯救字数短缺 → 1句变3句神器
比如写"保护环境",别只喊"Save the earth!":
"Only by taking actions, such as recycling and reducing plastic, can we create a world where the sky is bluer and the rivers are clearer."
(1个句式=原因+措施+结果,阅卷老师一看就按高分框架打分!)
⭐ 开头炸场型
现象分析:"Nowadays, there is a growing concern that..."(替代老套的"Many people think...")
观点表态:"From my perspective, nothing is more important than..."
⭐ 论证王炸型
因果推理:"The reason why... is that..."(避免生硬用"because")
举例支撑:"A case in point is that..."(比"For example"更显功底)
⭐ 结尾升华型
呼吁行动:"Only when we join hands can we..."
展望未来:"If we fail to take measures, chances are that..."
紧急提醒家长
中考作文超30%的分数取决于句式复杂度!2 这些模板不是死背,而是帮孩子建立"表达反应库"——考试时像拼乐高一样快速组合!
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