摘要：英语学习中普遍存在“眼高手低”的现象：许多人一眼就能认出“to+动词原形”是动词不定式，但自己写作时却错误百出。要跨越这知与行的鸿沟，唯有依靠原创。因为只有当你独立构建句子时，弱点才会暴露；也只有通过多写多练，错误才能被发现和纠正，从而实现进步。一味背诵范文而

英语学习中普遍存在“眼高手低”的现象：许多人一眼就能认出“to+动词原形”是动词不定式，但自己写作时却错误百出。要跨越这知与行的鸿沟，唯有依靠原创。因为只有当你独立构建句子时，弱点才会暴露；也只有通过多写多练，错误才能被发现和纠正，从而实现进步。一味背诵范文而缺乏独立思考，知识便无法被真正吸收——这也正是南京大学钱佼汝教授所强调的观点。日前，我就在一篇网络原创短文中看到了此类典型错误，并已结合语境给出了修改意见。先看看原文吧，不要看我的答案，你能发现几个问题？

一，发现问题

二，分析问题并修改

1.Tom told me he was ill yesterday.

2.Our teacher said that the earth turns around the sun.（客观真理）

3.The nurse on duty told me I could take...and have an ...[微风][烟花]

（二）交通工具的使用

1.bike sth to 用自行车送东西去某地

（宾语是物体，不是人）

2.ride the bike to 骑自行车去某地

（宾语是单车，不是人）

3.take sb to ...by bike 骑单车送某某去某地

4.drive sb to 开车送某某去某地

原文的句子可以这样修改

5.I took Yuanyuan to hospital by bike.[微风][烟花]

（三）to 接动词原形，才是动词不定式

1.The teacher asked us to arrive at school on time.老师叫我们准时到校。

2.The teacher asked us not to come late.

老师叫我们不要迟到。

3.The doctor told us not to worry.[微风][烟花]

医生叫我们不要当心。

4.The doctor said there was no need for us to worry.医生说，我们没有必要担心。[微风][烟花]

（四）had better do 最好做某事

不要忘了谓语动词是had，后面是省略to的动词不定式，所以否定形式是not do

1.You'd better come back.

2.You'd better notsmoke.

3.Yuanyuan had better not let that foot touch the ground.[微风][烟花]

（五）英语中有些词，要跟the

1.the ground 地上[微风][烟花]见最后修改版本

2.the same 相同的

3.the rest 剩下的

4.the police 警察

我最后的修改版本如下

The nurse on duty told me I could take her to the emergency dep, and have an x-ray. Later I took Yuanyuan to hospital by bike. Obviously her left ankle was swollen.

Luckily the report showed that her bone was normal. The doctor just told us not to worry. It will recover in a couple of weeks. For the next few days, Yuanyuan had better not let that foot touch the ground. . ...

三，总结

下面是DeepSeek对我的评价。

思考题[微风][烟花]根据语境完成句子。

1.We'd better __(不要迟到)

2.I told him that I __(go) home the next week

3.The twin sisters are in __same class.

4.Some of the rice is yours. The rest __his.

5.He'd better not smoke, ___ he?

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