摘要：某英文网站在开展以“亲近大自然”为主题的征文活动，请你用英文写一篇短文投稿，谈谈你亲近大自然的一次经历，内容包括此次经历发生的时间、地点、活动内容及感受。
1．亲近大自然，不仅能够放松身体，还能滋养精神。
某英文网站在开展以“亲近大自然”为主题的征文活动，请你用英文写一篇短文投稿，谈谈你亲近大自然的一次经历，内容包括此次经历发生的时间、地点、活动内容及感受。
提示词语：park, see, walk, take photos, wonderful
提示问题：When and where did you go? What did you do there? How did you feel?
【答案】
Last Sunday, I went to Mangshan Forest Park with my parents. We had a good time there.
Mangshan Forest Park is one of the best parks in my hometown and it’s not far from my home. So we rode to the park and got there early in the morning. Walking in the forest and listening to the songs of birds made us feel relaxed. We even climbed to the top of the mountain and took lots of photos.
It’s great to get close to nature and I will always remember this wonderful trip.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
②时态：时态为“一般过去时”；
③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏，适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，简单介绍你去了哪里，以及时间，同伴；
第二步，介绍你在那里做了什么；
第三步，谈谈你的感受。
[亮点词汇]
①had a good time玩得开心
②not far from离……不远
③the top of ……的顶部
[高分句型]
①It’s great to get close to nature and I will always remember this wonderful trip.（and并列句）
2．假如你是李华，暑假里，你随家人到澳大利亚旅游。抵达澳大利亚三天后，请你根据下列提示，给Tom写封信，简单介绍在澳大利亚度假的情况。提示：
(1)参观了很多名胜古迹；看了袋鼠（kangaroo）；去了悉尼歌剧院（Sydney Opera House）；
(2)澳大利亚正值冬季、天气比较冷，去滑冰了；
(3)食物美味，吃了澳洲龙虾（Australian Lobster）， 非常贵；
(4)大部分人们都比较友善。
要求：(1)语句通顺，表达正确；
(2)信中须包括所有提示内容，可适当发挥；
(3)词数：60左右（开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数）。
注意：字数至少60词。文章中不得出现真实的人名、校名等信息。
Dear Tom,
Yours,
Li Hua
【答案】
Dear Tom,
My family and I arrived in Australia three days ago. Australia is a large and beautiful country. It’s winter now and it’s a little cold here these days. We visited many places of interest. We saw the kangaroos and they are cute. We went to the Sydney Opera House. I went skating. It was so excellent.
Most people in Australia are really kind and friendly, but some are not. The food here is also very special. We had Australian Lobster, too. They were so expensive! And we enjoyed it very much.
Yours,
Li Hua
【详解】【总体分析】
题材：本文是一篇应用文，为书信；
时态：时态以“一般过去时”为主；
提示：写作要点已给出，考生应根据提示要点进行书面表达, 不要遗漏要点。应能够围绕主题准确使用一定的语法、词汇、短语和句型等, 清楚连贯地表达自己的思想, 进而完成写作任务。
【写作步骤】
第一步，表明写作意图。引出“介绍在澳大利亚度假的情况”这一话题；
第二步，具体阐述写作内容。从行程、天气、美食等方面来介绍这次度假的具体情况；
第三步，书写结语。表达对这次度假的好感。
【亮点词汇】
places of interest名胜古迹
go skating去滑冰
cute可爱的
【高分句型】
It’s winter now and it’s a little cold here these days.（It作主语，表示时间或天气等）
Most people in Australia are really kind and friendly, but some are not.（but连接并列句）
3．生活中有很多的精彩片段，请以“A wonderful ________” 为题，并按以下要点和要求写一篇短文分享你的一次经历。
要点：
1. 请把标题补充完整，如party, picnic, trip, lesson等。
2. 做了什么事情？
3. 你的感受如何？
要求：
1. 包含所给信息，可适当发挥，不得出现真实的姓名和校名；
2. 条理清晰，语句通顺，意思连贯，书写工整；
3. 60词左右。
A wonderful ________
【答案】
A wonderful birthday party Last Sunday was my 14th birthday. I had a great time with my family and friends. They had a wonderful party for me at home.In the morning, my father bought a beautiful birthday cake and there were 14 candles on it. My mother went shopping and bought lots of food and drinks. My friends brought some presents, such as a book, a football, a pen and some toys. I liked them very much. At noon, we all sat around the birthday cake and I made a wish. Then we blew the candles out together. My friends sang the song Happy Birthday to me. My sister cooked delicious lunch for us.The party was wonderful and I was very happy. I will never forget it.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是材料作文；
②时态：主要时态为“一般过去时”；
③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏提示内容中“提示信息”的要求均要一一阐述，适当发挥。
[写作步骤]
第一步：表明写作意图。借用“上个周日是我的14岁生日”来引出重点介绍的内容。
第二步：具体阐述写作内容。依照提示信息的要点——所做的事情、感受等均要一一阐述。
第三步：书写结语。表达“我从不会忘记它”的美好。
[亮点词汇]
①went shopping去购物
②made a wish许愿
③blew the candles out吹蜡烛
[高分句型]
①My friends brought some presents, such as a book, a football, a pen and some toys. (such as用法）
②In the morning, my father bought a beautiful birthday cake and there were 14 candles on it. (and并列句)
4．和朋友一起度过时光总是美好的。不论是共度一个难忘的周末，还是一次愉快的郊游，或是一次有趣的实践活动，都令人印象深刻。请你根据以下提示写一篇短文，在下周的英语俱乐部活动中与大家分享。
提示：
1. What does your friend look like?
2. How was the weather that day?
3. What did you do there? And What do you think of your day?
要求：
1. 禁止抄袭本试卷中所有语篇内容;
2. 文中不得出现考生的真实姓名和学校名称;
3. 词数 80﹣100左右。
【答案】
Last weekend, I spent some wonderful time with my friend, Lily. She has long, curly hair and always wears a warm smile. The weather that day was warm and sunny. We went to the countryside for a picnic and a hike. Along the way, we saw colorful butterflies and heard the chirping of birds. We shared a delicious spread of food, laughing and chatting about everything under the sun. The hike was challenging but worthy.
Looking back, I think of that day as truly unforgettable. It strengthened our friendship and reminded us of the simple joys life that has to offer.
【详解】[总体分析]
题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
②时态：时态主要为一般过去时；
③提示：写作时注意围绕所给问题展开描述，可适当发挥。
[写作步骤]
第一步，介绍旅行的地点，引出主题；
第二步，具体描述在旅行时的所见所闻；
第三步，表达收获和感受，书写结语。
[亮点词汇]
①wear a warm smile 带着温暖的微笑
②remind sb. of sth. 使某人想起某事
[高分句型]
①We shared a delicious spread of food, laughing and chatting about everything under the sun.(现在分词作伴随状语)
②It strengthened our friendship and reminded us of the simple joys life that has to offer.(that引导的定语从句)
5．假设你是李华，现在是周日下午2点，你正在给你的英国好友Mike写电子邮件，请在邮件中介绍你的家人并描述他们现在的活动情况。
要求：
1. 包含图片所给提示内容，对家人的介绍可适当发挥；
2. 不得出现真实的人名、校名等相关信息；
3. 词数70左右。
Dear Mike,
Li Hua
【答案】
Dear Mike,
How’s it going? Now it is 2: 00 p. m. on Sunday. The weather is fine. My family and I are busy. My grandfather is reading a newspaper. My grandmother is watering the flowers in the garden. My father’s car is dirty, so he is cleaning his car. My mother is playing with my sister in the living room. What am I doing? Ha-ha! I’m writing to you.
We are having a good time.
Good luck!
Li Hua
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇应用文，为电子邮件；
②时态：时态为“现在进行时”；
③提示：写作要求已给出，学生不要遗漏题目中的要点，适当添加细节，写作时保持主谓一致，注意字数要求。
[写作步骤]
第一步，介绍现在的时间；
第二步，介绍你的家人并描述他们现在的活动情况；
第三步，书写结语。
[亮点词汇]
①reading a newspaper看报纸
②watering the flowers浇花
③play with sb与某人玩
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