摘要:在英语写作中,我们经常会遇到需要连续使用多个动词的情况。很多学习者面对这类结构时,往往不知如何处理。其实,只要记住一个基本原则:一个句子只能有一个谓语动词,其余动词需根据其主动或被动的关系,改为适当的非谓语形式。例如,在“Collect stamps is m
在英语写作中,我们经常会遇到需要连续使用多个动词的情况。很多学习者面对这类结构时,往往不知如何处理。其实,只要记住一个基本原则:一个句子只能有一个谓语动词,其余动词需根据其主动或被动的关系,改为适当的非谓语形式。例如,在“Collect stamps is my hobby 这个句子中,已经有了谓语动词“is”,因此前面的动词“collect ”应改为动名词形式“Collecting ”,表示一般性或习惯性的概念,从而构成“Collecting stamps is myhobby ”。文章的第(三)部分讲解动名词做主语。此外,一定要明确:谓语动词的表现形式只有三种,即动词原形、第三人称单数形式以及过去式,除此之外的动词形式都属于非谓语动词。今天推荐的原创英文,作者在这方面出现了典型的错误,同时还存在一些其它表达问题。看看原文吧,你能发现几个问题?
一,发现问题
这是DeepSeek对我的评价。
二,分析问题并修改
(一)regardless of 后面接名词,或者从句,不能接形容词。可以改成whether 引导的从句。complain least about不地道,可以改为had better not complain...可以删除habits
1.She always travels by air regardless of the airfare.她总是乘飞机旅行,不管机票高低。
2.Anyone can learn to cook, regardless of whi they are. 任何人都可以学做饭,不管他们是谁。
3.To give positive support, you'd better not complain about their current behaviors whether they are right or wrong...
为了提供积极的支持,你最好不要抱怨他们当前的行为,无论他们是对还是错。
(二)根据上句,接下来应该与第一句相反,所以用连接副词instead。朝着...方向,用介词短语in the direction
Instead, try to encourage and guide them in the right direction.相反,要尽量鼓励并引导他们走向正确的方向。
(三)动名词做主语,表示一般性,习惯性
本句谓语动词是pushes,前面的动词应该是做主语,可以用动名词,因为这里表示一般性的概念。
1.Complaining or scolding only pushes them to a defensive postion and makes them reluctant to change or improve.抱怨或责骂只会让他们产生防备心理,并且不愿意改变或改进。
2.Drinking more water helps you recover sooner when you have a cold.
你感冒的时候,多喝水有助于恢复更快。
3.Singing does good to your health.
唱歌有益于健康。
4.Doing homework with music on is my his habit.放着音乐做作业是他的习惯。
根据语境,优化词汇和语法,我最后修改版本如下
To provide positive support, you'd better not complain about their current behaviors, whether they are right or wrong. Instead, try to encourage and guide them in the right direction. Complaining or scolding only pushes them into a defensive position and makes them reluctant to change or improve.
三,总结
思考题[微风][烟花]
1.__(talk) with foreigners in English is a good way to improve your oral English.
2.It takes two hours __(do)my homework each evening.
3.The sports meeting will be held next week regardless__the weather.
4.The birds flew away__different directions.
5.Tom's ___(smoke) at home every day makes his family feel sick.
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