谓语动词只能是一个(原创英文纠错)

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摘要:掌握谓语动词的概念及其“唯一性”是英语学习者的基本功。我这里再次强调,我们讨论的范围是现代英语在中学及成人阶段必须掌握的核心语法,不涉及特殊用法。尽管老师在课堂上反复讲解,同学们在练习中也多次碰到,但在实际写作中,相关错误仍然屡见不鲜。今天批改作业时,我就发现

掌握谓语动词的概念及其“唯一性”是英语学习者的基本功。我这里再次强调,我们讨论的范围是现代英语在中学及成人阶段必须掌握的核心语法,不涉及特殊用法。尽管老师在课堂上反复讲解,同学们在练习中也多次碰到,但在实际写作中,相关错误仍然屡见不鲜。今天批改作业时,我就发现几个典型问题,比如谓语动词和语态的使用、形容词与副词的混淆,以及词组的搭配等。我已结合具体语境给出了修改建议。看看学生的原文和DeepSeek对我的评价吧。

一,发现问题

二,分析问题并修改

(一)根据语境判断,是过去时态。弹奏乐器应该是play,不能用play with(玩耍),钢琴曲应该是piano piece,更重要的是“超级难”表达应该是副词修饰形容词,但是形容词不能修饰形容词。

1.He played a quite wonderful piano piece.

他演奏了一曲相当精彩的钢琴曲。

quite, adv, 十分

2.The boy's calligraphy is pretty good.

这个男孩的书法超级好。

pretty, adv, 非常

所以,原文的句子应该这样修改

3.I didn't have to play the extremely difficult piano piece.[微风][烟花]

我不用弹那个超级难的钢琴曲了。

(二)说明当时的心情,用这词组更好。

be filled with,充满喜悦

My heart was filled with joy.[微风][烟花]

(三)可以用定语从句把这两句连起来,其中可以用词组make sb 形容词,现在分词做状语。

This was an unforgettable mistake which still makes me ashamed when thinking about it.

(四)谓语动词是动词原形,过去式和第三人称单数形式。一个句子谓语动词只能是一个。这里已经出现三个谓语动词do, can, give。按照语法,应该这样处理,动名词做主语,后面用被动语态。Doing things shouldn't be given up,但是这样不地道。所以不得不改变一种说法。

This mistake taught me that we shouldn't give up when we face challenges, and we shouldn't resort to lying, either.[微风][烟花]

resort to doing 通过某种手段

我最后的修改版本如下

I didn't have to play the extremely difficult piano piece. My heart was filled with joy....

This was an unforgettable mistake which still makes me ashamed when thinking about it. However, this mistake also taught me that we shouldn't give up when we face challenges, and that we shouldn't resort to lying, either.

三,总结

下面是DeepSeek对我的评价

来源:郑老师KMYYZY

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