摘要：还有两个月有余时间又快高考了。考生你需要——写出能得高分的英语作文——哪怕提高5分也行，向高分靠拢！听逻辑思维讲解，你能茅塞顿开。那么，你能写出得高分英语作文得有英语逻辑思维之深度，达到“句型合意思合”。相反，“型不合而意不合”的模板套作中文思维的英语作文，就

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标题之意：高分！治好写不成英语作文通病,手把手教考生写出优秀英语作文。

还有两个月有余时间又快高考了。考生你需要——写出能得高分的英语作文——哪怕提高5分也行，向高分靠拢！听逻辑思维讲解，你能茅塞顿开。那么，你能写出得高分英语作文得有英语逻辑思维之深度，达到“句型合意思合”。相反，“型不合而意不合”的模板套作中文思维的英语作文，就只能得辛苦分了。所谓的“型不合而意不合”就是受汉语“形散神不散”影响所致。这是写英语的大忌。

之所以说是大忌，是因为中文句子在“生搬硬套”英文（模板）写作中，其句意的原因和结果一概不谈；由此真实观点不告诉读者，而是让读者自己去琢磨。因此这样的英语作文，难让英语为母语的人们，一起跟着中式思维“运行”起来，所以外国人难看明白。这就是英文写作难得高分又难出国的“隐性”思维的弱点。

为了根除这个隐性弱点，请你看两篇英语作文：A篇——既能得高分又能出国的英语作文；B篇——得“高分”难出国的英语作文。以“向国外捐献中文图书”为题写英语作文，具体要求：1自我介绍；2拟捐赠图书的类型、册数、用途；3询问对方的其他需求；4可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。

A篇——既能得高分又能出国的英语作文

Dear Sirs,

I LI JIN as the monitor of Chinese Class write you a letter, in the name of the Chairman of the Student Union from Chen Guang High School, telling you about the message interesting to you. As understood from the message, this school is to give a donation of a little more than 100 books to your Chinese Classes of the US Friendly Exchange School according to agreement reached between us, during the 4-day visit to be paid to you by our 40-member Summer-Camper delegation beginning on July 1, 20 - -.

The donation could help to get you acquainted with information about the ancient- and modern-time society in China that is to say the books in question are of walks in the Chinese history and culture together with their literature arts. And here is not to mention Chinese language, of course.

You including your fellows, each and every classmate in your Chinese Classes, are expected to be provided with a set of fore-said books in exchange for cultures. This needs your advising us how many books they are made available enough to you accurately.

The exchange, that will prove fruitful, enables the friendly relationship to establish between our two schools, in my view. Such relationship being developed fast future, you are likely to acquire more of field-related knowledge in China, This shows that for further books else, if required, please do not hesitate to contact us as soon as possibly.

I look forward to your reply at your earliest convenience to us on both howmany books as mentioned above you would get and on what kind of ones else, accordingly.

Yours sincerely,

B篇——难得“高分”难出国的英语作文

Dear Chris,

I am Li hua, chairman of the student union, from Chen guang high school. I am writing to tell you something about donating books to your class, to enhance communication with your school, we prepared about 100 books ranging from Chinese cartoon to literature. With them, you may have a better understanding of China and its culture, we will take the books when participating in the summer camp this July to your school.

Would you please tell me something about your other requirements? We will spare no effort to meet your needs. I sincerely hope that we may exchange with each other more and more and developing our friendship.

Best wishes

Yours sincerely

Li hua

总结：

注意比较：A、B两篇英语文（大小）观点及各提示点的原因和结果是怎么衔接起来的，因果是否论述清楚，如论述清楚，则得高分是肯定的；那你写的英语作文走出国门也是轻而易举的事儿了。英语逻辑写作梦想，他人给你掌声；英语思维写作不惧任何困难。让考生在高考中写出：既能得高分又能出国的英语作文。学生如有这种英语思维写作需求的帮助，请留言私信我助你一臂之力了。期待你成为英语作文弄潮儿向“涛头”立高分，用逻辑思维把握写作创新的真谛！

编辑语：

《英语作文弄潮儿向“涛头”立高分 逻辑思维怎么把握写作创新的真谛》一文阐：有必要强调写英语用逻辑思维的观点，是英语为母语人写英语的基本准则。英语是逻辑语言，不是模板语言，而是英语的灵魂。如此可以写出英语味道的英语也就是说内容清晰结构完整语法正确的英语文章。

来源：原创英语写作范文