摘要：模板："In my opinion, ______. I hope everyone can ______, because ______!"

"中式英语"陷阱

❌ 错误示范："I very like swimming."

✅ 破解公式："主语+真正动词+修饰" → "I really enjoy swimming."

"逻辑混乱"硬伤

❌ 问题：事件顺序用"First, Then, Finally"，但内容跳跃

✅ 技巧：时间轴串联法

��用时间标志词：After that... / Suddenly... / In the end...

"字数不足"风险

✅ 应急策略："细节扩写法"

原句："I helped my mom."

升级版："Last Sunday morning, I carefully helped my mom water the flowers in the garden."

法则1： "3步开头法"抓住考官眼球

① 背景引入："With the development of society..."

② 观点点题："I strongly believe that..."

③ 过渡衔接："Let me explain in three aspects."

法则2： "万能逻辑词"提升连贯性

并列关系：not only...but also...

因果关系：as a result / therefore

对比转折：however / on the contrary

法则3： "高级替换词"秒杀平庸表达

普通词→ 高分词：

like → be fond of / prefer

good → excellent / fantastic

法则4： "情感升华法"打造结尾亮点

模板："In my opinion, ______. I hope everyone can ______, because ______!"

法则5： "3分钟检查清单"规避低级错误

✓ 单复数一致 ✓ 时态统一 ✓ 首字母大写

（以"My Favorite Season"为例）

题目：Write about your favorite season (60-80 words)

范文段落：

"Among all four seasons, autumn is my favorite. The weather is neither too hot nor too cold, which makes it perfect for outdoor activities. Last year, my family went hiking in the mountains, and we enjoyed the golden leaves dancing in the wind. What's more, I can eat delicious mooncakes during Mid-Autumn Festival! I love autumn because it brings me joy and sweet memories."

拆解亮点：

结构清晰：总起→原因1→原因2（事例）→情感升华

高级句型：定语从句(which makes it...)、并列动词(enjoyed...dancing)

文化元素：巧妙融入中秋节

1. 人物描写模板

"______ is the most ______ person I know. He/She always ______. Once, ______. From him/her, I learned that ______."

2. 事件叙述模板

"It was a ______ day when ______. At first, ______. Then, ______. Finally, ______. This experience taught me ______."

3. 观点表达模板

"Different people have different opinions on ______. Some think ______, while others believe ______. As for me, ______ because ______."

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