摘要：英语原创过程中，主从句的各种成分一定要交代清楚。今天我在网上读到一篇英语学习者的原创英文，作者就犯了这方面的典型错误，同时还存在其它问题。我根据短文内容，给出了相应的修改建议。先看看原文吧。

英语原创过程中，主从句的各种成分一定要交代清楚。今天我在网上读到一篇英语学习者的原创英文，作者就犯了这方面的典型错误，同时还存在其它问题。我根据短文内容，给出了相应的修改建议。先看看原文吧。

一，发现问题

二，分析问题并修改

（一）英语中的慢跑，有几种表示方法

1.go jogging

2.take a jog

3.go for a jog

所以，这里可以这样修改

I hadn't gone jogging for a week.[微风][烟花]

（二）使用定语从句的时候，要注意被限定词做什么成分，主句和从句的主谓分别是什么，引导词做什么成分。根据上下文，这里的主句很明显缺了主语––起床之后我第一件要做的事。不然的话，起床与第一件事毫无关系。

The first thing that I must do after I got up yesterday morning was to go jogging.[微风][烟花]

这里定语从句that I must do ...morning限定主句的主语the first thing的。由于被限定词中有序数词，所以关系代词用that，指代the first thing，在从句中做do的宾语，可以省略。

（三）lack 有两个词性

lack n. 缺少。词组 lack of

1.His lack of experience made the interview difficult.

他经验不足，使得面试很困难。

2.The project failed due to a lack of money.

因为缺钱导致项目失败。

lack vt 缺乏

3.She lacks confidence.

她缺乏自信。

4.Apparently she lacked outside exercise.

很明显，她缺乏室外锻炼。[微风][烟花]

5.We take exercise each day.

我们每天锻炼身体。exercise不可数名词。

（四）泡茶的地道英语是make tea

I made her some Yinqiao tea, which I had bought at Taihang.[烟花][微风]

我最后的修改版本如下

I hadn't gone jogging for a week. So the first thing that I must do after I got up yesterday morning was to go jogging around the Coastal Square. It was really a……

Apparently she lacked outside exercise. I made her some Yinqiao tea, which I had bought at Taihang.

三，总结

这是DeepSeek对我的评价。

思考题[微风][烟花]

1.My father goes for _jog each evening.

2.She always __guests tea when they come to visit their shop.

3.This is the third mobile phone for___I have ever paid over 3000 yuan

4.Her lack _teaching experience made him fail in last interview.

5.The little boy dare not go into the water, because he _(lack) courage.

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