摘要：• 标题公式为核心事件 + 数据/价值，例如“Art Exhibition Blossoms: 150+ Works Displayed”。

一、 写作基础要点

• 结构上要掌握“标题→导语→主体→结语”框架，涵盖5W1H要素（时间、地点、人物、事件、原因、结果）。

• 语言方面，通过数据故事化（如“200 + 项目”）和直接引语增强客观性。

• 实战要求独立完成校园活动报道（如科技节、艺术展），词数精准控制在80词左右。

二、写作步骤详解

• Step 1：提取关键信息

• 划出5W1H，从题目中提取关键信息，例如科技节中Who = 学生 + 专家，What = 科技节，When = 2025.3.5。

• 删除冗余内容，去掉主观感受（如“I think”）和天气描述。

• Step 2：填充内容

• 标题公式为核心事件 + 数据/价值，例如“Art Exhibition Blossoms: 150+ Works Displayed”。

• 导语模板是“On [日期], [主体] organized [活动], achieving [成果]”，如“On March 5, 2025, Sunshine High School hosted a Science Festival, attracting 300+ participants.”。

• 主体技巧包括用动词链（如“commenced→demonstrated→designed”）串联活动流程；将抽象数字具象化（如“200人”→“全校25%学生”）；插入直接引语（如“"This project taught me teamwork," sAId Li Lei.”）；结语用“不仅…而且…”句式升华。

• Step 3：语言优化

• 替换主观词，如“very successful” → “attracted 300 participants”。

• 全程使用一般过去时，如“hosted, showcased”。

三、范文精析与仿写训练

• 科技节范文精析：导语5W1H全覆盖且有数据亮点（80 + projects）；主体运用动词链、引语和数据（60%）；结语用数据（85%）和校长评价强化意义。

On March 5, 2025, Sunshine High School hosted its annual Science Festival, featuring over 120 students showcasing 80+ projects in robotics, AI, and eco-innovations to bridge theory and practice.

Students demonstrated self-designed robots and solar-powered devices. "Creating a hydroponic system showed me engineering’s real-world value," said Zhang Lei, a Grade 10 participant. 60% of exhibits used recycled materials, aligning with eco-friendly goals.

Principal Li Ming stated, "This festival ignites both creativity and critical thinking." 85% attendees expressed interest in STEM fields, reflecting growing scientific passion.

• 防写任务 - 校园艺术展报道：同样遵循写作要点，如导语介绍活动时间、主体和成果，主体有学生展示和引语，结语有校长评价和数据（90%）。

On April 15, 2025, our school unveiled a campus art exhibition featuring 150+ student creations, including calligraphy, paintings, and handicrafts.

Students demonstrated traditional paper-cutting techniques and shared their inspiration. "Art connects us to our roots," said Wang Mei, a Grade 11 artist. 40% of artworks were made from recycled materials.

Headmaster Chen praised, "This exhibition not only celebrates talent but also fosters cultural pride." 90% attendees planned to join next year’s event.

四、 自检清单

• 标题含核心事件 + 数据。

• 导语覆盖5W1H。

• 主体有动词链 + 引语 + 数据。

• 结语升华意义。

• 时态统一（一般过去时）。

• 无主观感受描述。

五、结语

新闻报道写作 = 结构清晰 + 数据支撑 + 客观表达。跟着指南练习，你也能成为校园小记者！立即动笔，用80词记录下校园活动，投稿至校英文报吧！

来源：没谱的高中历史老师