摘要:描述经历时运用丰富词汇和多样句式,如过去进行时描述场景,“not only...but also...” 等结构丰富表达。可适当使用连接词,如 “at first”“however”“finally” 增强逻辑性。
一、题目
"Don't be afraid of wetting your feet if you want to learn how to swim.”
想游泳就别怕湿了你的脚!
请你结合自己经历写一下对这句话的理解
二、审题
1、精准审题
题目要求结合自身经历阐述对 “想游泳就别怕湿了你的脚” 的理解,重点在于经历与感悟的紧密关联。
2、谋篇布局
开头引入名言并点明主题;中间详细叙述自身经历,突出面临的困难与勇敢尝试的过程;结尾总结经历所带来的成长,呼应名言主旨。
3、措辞造句
描述经历时运用丰富词汇和多样句式,如过去进行时描述场景,“not only...but also...” 等结构丰富表达。可适当使用连接词,如 “at first”“however”“finally” 增强逻辑性。
三、范文
范文1
"Don't be afraid of wetting your feet if you want to learn how to swim." This saying holds profound truth.
Once, I was terrified of public speaking. My heart would race at the mere thought of standing before an audience. But I knew I had to overcome this fear. So, I took the plunge and joined a debate club. At first, my voice trembled, and words got stuck. However, with each practice, I gained more confidence. Finally, I could speak fluently.
Just like learning to swim, facing my fear directly led to personal growth.
范文2
The quote "Don't be afraid of wetting your feet if you want to learn how to swim" deeply resonates with my experience of learning guitar.
Initially, the complex chords and strumming patterns seemed insurmountable. I was hesitant to start, fearing failure. But I summoned up my courage and began my learning journey. Day by day, I practiced, making countless mistakes. Eventually, I could play simple songs.
This experience taught me that only by bravely taking the first step and enduring the difficulties can we master new skills, just as one must enter the water to learn swimming.
范文3
"Don't be afraid of wetting your feet if you want to learn how to swim." This adage vividly captures the essence of embracing challenges for growth. For me, it was learning to code that brought this saying to life.
Initially, the complex algorithms and lines of code seemed like an insurmountable mountain. Syntax errors constantly plagued my early attempts, and the fear of failure loomed large. However, I didn't let these difficulties deter me. I started with small, basic projects, gradually building my confidence. With each problem I solved, I was metaphorically "getting my feet wet" in the coding world. Eventually, I was able to develop a simple but functional app.
This experience taught me that only by having the courage to step into the unknown and endure the initial hardships can we achieve our goals, just as one must enter the water to master swimming.
来源:新概念英语的教学