摘要：下面是一篇高中英语读后续写题，请根据前面给出的文章片段，续写内容，共150词左右，单词限定在新课程标准的规定词汇内，适当使用非谓动词，定语从句，名词性从句等高级句式和高级结构，剧情合理且富有深意，续写的两段必须以题目最后给出的两段开头作为起始。给出三个版本的续

今天练习一篇读后续写，但是看到给的范文还是很单薄，决定用AI辅助生成几篇范文。

下面是一篇高中英语读后续写题，请根据前面给出的文章片段，续写内容，共150词左右，单词限定在新课程标准的规定词汇内，适当使用非谓动词，定语从句，名词性从句等高级句式和高级结构，剧情合理且富有深意，续写的两段必须以题目最后给出的两段开头作为起始。给出三个版本的续写故事答案：

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Polly Goodman，82-year-old，was a rich old woman.Her husband was a businessman and left her a large fortune after his death，so she had no problems supporting herself.The only problem was that her son who was a doctor busy with his work seldom had time to visit her，leaving her living lonely.

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几秒钟后，AI给出了三篇参考范文，感觉比原来的范文好了很多。后来我打开了深度思考，之后给出的范文更加有深度。大家给个意见，看看如何？

答案给出的范文：

Upon arrival，the kids invited Polly inside.The moment Polly stepped into the house，she was shocked to see the house in a mess with toys scattered everywhere on the floor.【高分句型一】Meanwhile，she spotted Lydia lying in the sofa，coughing heavily.【高分句型二】Seeing Polly approaching，Lydia struggled to sit up but failed.Apparently，Lydia was seriously sick and needed immediate treatment.When asked why she didn't go to hospital，Lydia explained she was too weak to drive.Out of sympathy，Polly offered to drive her to the hospital.（Polly进屋后看到的场景，发现Lydia病重并主动提供帮助）

Polly took the mother to the hospital her son worked in.Having learned about the situation through the phone called by Polly，her son helped contact doctors.After a careful medical check，Lydia was told she had to stay in hospital for days，which worried her a lot，for her kids were too young to stay at home alone.Polly comforted her that she would take care of the kids.Hearing that，Lydia was so deeply moved that she could say nothing.She hugged Polly tightly to express her sincere gratitude.（Polly和儿子帮助Lydia治疗疾病，并照看孩子）

没有开启深度思考的范文，词汇比较简单，剧情也合理。

版本一

Upon arrival, the kids invited Polly inside. The small house was in a mess, with dirty dishes piled up in the sink and clothes scattered everywhere. Corey told Polly with tears in his eyes that their mother was seriously ill and couldn't get out of bed. He had been trying to take care of his sister and mother alone. Touched by the kids' situation, Polly comforted them gently, promising to help.

Polly took the mother to the hospital her son worked in. Her son, moved by his mother's kindness, arranged for Lydia to receive the best treatment immediately. As time passed, Lydia recovered gradually. From then on, the two families became close. Polly finally found the warmth of family she had long missed, and the kids got an extra caring "grandma".

版本二

Upon arrival, the kids invited Polly inside. There, Polly saw Lydia lying weakly on the bed, her face pale and breath labored. Lydia tearfully admitted she was too poor to afford medical treatment. Polly, determined to help, said firmly, "Don't worry. I'll do everything I can." Her heart ached at the sight of this struggling family.

Polly took the mother to the hospital her son worked in. Her son was shocked by the severity of Lydia's illness and organized a team of experts to treat her. During the treatment, Polly accompanied the kids, teaching them and playing with them. After Lydia got better, they often visited Polly, making her life full of laughter and love, which she had been longing for.

版本三

Upon arrival, the kids invited Polly inside. As Polly entered the dimly - lit house, she could sense the despair in the air. Corey explained that their mother's condition had worsened rapidly. Polly, realizing the urgency, didn't hesitate. She immediately called an ambulance and stayed with the kids, trying to ease their fear.

Polly took the mother to the hospital her son worked in. Her son spared no effort to save Lydia's life. After Lydia's recovery, she was deeply grateful to Polly. The two women formed a strong bond, and the kids brought new joy to Polly's life. Polly finally understood that helping others could bring such great happiness and fill the void in her heart.

之后开始深度思考功能后，词汇更复杂，但是剧情更加符合英文小说的描述，句式也更加有味道。

版本一：温暖的救赎

Upon arrival, the kids invited Polly inside. The room was dim and stuffy, with a faint smell of medicine lingering in the air. Lydia lay on a makeshift bed, her cheeks flushed with fever. "I didn’t want to burden anyone," she whispered hoarsely, tears pooling in her eyes. "Corey has been skipping school to care for Daisy..." Polly’s heart ached, realizing the family’s silent struggle. She gently pressed Lydia’s hand, saying, "No one should face hardship alone."

Polly took the mother to the hospital her son worked in. Though initially hesitant to bother her busy son, Polly mustered courage to call him. To her surprise, Dr. Goodman rushed down, eyes softening at the sight of the exhausted mother. "We’ll handle this," he said, arranging tests while guiding Polly to a quiet corner. "I’m sorry I haven’t visited enough," he murmured. That day, Lydia received treatment, and Polly’s son began dropping by weekly. The old woman’s loneliness melted away as laughter filled her home—proof that kindness could mend both strangers and family ties.

版本二：跨越代际的纽带

Upon arrival, the kids invited Polly inside. Daisy clung to Corey’s sleeve, whispering, "Is Mommy going to heaven?" Polly’s throat tightened at the innocent question. Lydia, barely conscious, clutched a faded photo of her late husband. "She hasn’t eaten in days," Corey choked out. Without hesitation, Polly dialed her son’s emergency line, then held Daisy’s tiny hand, promising, "Your mommy will fight, and so will we."

Polly took the mother to the hospital her son worked in. As nurses wheeled Lydia in, Dr. Goodman noticed his mother’s trembling hands and wrapped an arm around her. "You’re braver than you think," he said, a rare moment of warmth. Weeks later, Lydia, now stable, insisted on thanking Polly with homemade cookies. Soon, weekly game nights became tradition—Corey teaching Polly chess, Daisy braiding her silver hair. Polly realized loneliness was never a lack of wealth but a shortage of shared moments, and she’d finally found her forever family.

版本三：生命的镜像

Upon arrival, the kids invited Polly inside. The stark reality hit her: peeling wallpaper, empty cupboards, and a calendar marked with "no more meds" in red. Lydia apologized weakly, "I tried to hide it... didn’t want the kids to worry." Polly swallowed the lump in her throat, recalling her own silent evenings. "Let’s worry together now," she said, dialing an ambulance with a determined hand.

Polly took the mother to the hospital her son worked in. While waiting, Dr. Goodman sighed, "Some cases remind us why we chose this profession." His words struck Polly—had he forgotten why she needed him? That night, as Lydia slept, mother and son sat in the cafeteria, sharing stories they’d missed. Lydia’s recovery sparked a routine: Polly tutoring Daisy, Corey jogging with her son, and weekly sunset walks where four generations (Polly’s late husband’s photo in hand) felt connected. Polly learned that healing wasn’t just for the sick—it was for anyone brave enough to say, "I need you."

以往，没有AI的情况下，读后续写的分析及范写是英语老师的一大难点。老师的思维受限于词汇量和生活经历，很难给学生更多优秀的范文。现在在AI的辅助之下，读后续写的辅导和写作可以有了更多的选择。

来源：公考石头