摘要：一些英语形容词（如hot, ill, ready, eager )因词义与动词高度相关，常被学习者误用为动词，这是一个普遍且严重的高频错误。在今日评析的英语原创文章中，我们不仅能看到这个典型问题，还能发现几处其他的语言表达瑕疵。看看原文吧，你能发现几个问题？

一些英语形容词（如hot, ill, ready, eager )因词义与动词高度相关，常被学习者误用为动词，这是一个普遍且严重的高频错误。在今日评析的英语原创文章中，我们不仅能看到这个典型问题，还能发现几处其他的语言表达瑕疵。看看原文吧，你能发现几个问题？

一，发现问题

二，分析问题并修改

（一）尽量运用非限制性定语从句，连接两个分句。使语言表达水平更上一层楼。Yuanyuan started a new term at her senior middle school, which is next to our home.

which指代前面的“高级中学”

用next to表达“在...隔壁”更通俗易懂。

（二）用so...that句型，引出结果状语从句。时态一致，运用as引导的方式状语从句，不能用like，因为like是介词，不是连词，一般情况下不能引导从句。用非限制性定语从句，which指代前面句子的含义。trouble是不可数名词。

1.It's so convenient that Yuanyuan can eat and sleep at home as she used to at her junior middle school, which can save both of us a lot of trouble.

如此方便，园园就可以像她原来读初中一样，在家吃饭睡觉了。这样可以省去好多麻烦事。

2.You must swim as Mr. Smith did just now.

你必须像史密斯先生刚才那样游泳。

3.She always dances beautifully as the teacher does.

她总是像老师那样跳舞，非常很优美。

4.The problem student often causes trouble at school.

这个问题学生经常在学校惹事。

5.Tom has great trouble in learning math.

汤姆的数学很吃力。

（三）hot不是动词，是形容词。感冒，发烧用动词have或者catch，注意搭配冠词a

1.My sister has a bad cold.

我妹妹得了重感冒。

2.Mary had a bad fever.

玛丽发高烧。

3.Last week I had a bad cold with a fever.

上周我重感冒，还发烧。[微风][烟花]

with 是介词，“具有”

带有发烧的重感冒。

（四）其它特殊的形容词，造句要加动词。

1.He fell ill today. 他今天病倒了。

2.We are ready.我们准备好了。

3.They are eager to travel

他们盼望去旅游。

根据语境，优化词汇和语法，我最后的修改版本如下

Yuanyuan started a new term at her senior middle school, which is next to our home. It's so convenient that Yuanyuan can eat and sleep at home as she used to at her junior middle school, which can save both of us a lot of trouble.

Last week I had a bad cold with a fever. ...

三，总结

下面是DeepSeek对我的评价

思考题[微风][烟花]完成句子。

1.He wears the same clothes __l do.(as, like)

2.My grandfather has a big house, __is in the countryside.

3.My mother __ a very bad headache the other day, __made her live in hospital.

4.The student speaks English __you and me.(like, as)

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