中考英语书面表达练习题

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摘要:题目:如今,越来越多的学生喜欢通过网络在线学习,请根据以下要点提示,以“Online Learning”为题,写一篇英语短文。

题目:如今,越来越多的学生喜欢通过网络在线学习,请根据以下要点提示,以“Online Learning”为题,写一篇英语短文。

要点提示:

1. 在线学习的好处(如学习时间灵活、课程资源丰富等);

2. 在线学习可能存在的问题(如网络卡顿、缺乏面对面交流等);

3. 你的观点或建议。

要求:

4. 80 - 120词,开头已给出,不计入总词数;

5. 文中不能出现自己的姓名和所在学校的名称;

6. 包含所有要点内容,可适当发挥,以使行文连贯。

Online Learning

Nowadays, more and more students prefer to study online.

Online learning offers several advantages. First, it provides flexible study time. Students can choose when to study according to their own schedules, which is especially convenient for those who have busy lives. Second, there is a wide variety of course resources available on the Internet. We can access different courses from top teachers all over the world, expanding our knowledge.

However, online learning also has some problems. Sometimes, the network may be unstable, resulting in the video freezing or buffering, which seriously affects the learning process. Besides, compared with traditional classroom learning, there is a lack of face - to - face communication between students and teachers.

In my opinion, online learning is a great way to supplement traditional learning. To make the most of it, students should choose a stable network environment and actively participate in online discussions to improve communication skills.

答案及指导

答案分析:

- 内容方面:

- 开头直接引出主题“Online Learning”,简洁明了。

- 主体部分从好处和问题两方面进行阐述,好处提到了学习时间灵活和课程资源丰富;问题阐述了网络卡顿和缺乏面对面交流,紧扣要点提示。最后表达自己的观点,认为在线学习是传统学习的补充,并提出了选择稳定网络环境和积极参与讨论的建议。

- 语言方面:

- 使用了“provides flexible study time”“a wide variety of”“result in”“compared with”“make the most of”等短语,使文章语言更加丰富、生动。

- 运用了“which is especially convenient for...”“which seriously affects...”等非限定性定语从句,提升了文章的语法水平。

写作指导:

- 审题立意:明确题目要求,确定以“Online Learning”为主题,围绕好处、问题、观点或建议三个方面展开写作。

- 构思布局:采用总分总的结构,开头引出主题,中间分别阐述好处和问题,结尾表明自己的观点或给出建议。

- 语言运用:

- 积累和运用丰富的词汇和短语,提升文章的表现力。比如描述好处时,可以用“convenient”“abundant”等词汇;描述问题时,“unstable”“lack”等词能准确达意。

- 适当运用复合句,如定语从句、状语从句等,展示语法水平,但要注意句子结构的正确性和合理性 ,不要为了用复杂句而强行拼凑。

- 检查修改:完成写作后,仔细检查语法错误、拼写错误和标点使用是否正确,同时检查内容是否完整、逻辑是否清晰。

来源:蓝的天白云飘

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