读后续写英语作文 对一些考生来说困难 为啥逆袭写到接近满分成绩呢

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摘要:‌逻辑先行‌:段落内部和整体结构需有明确的逻辑链条(原因、结果、措施、举例、适当评价等)。通过‌三段论结构:(1)引言·(2)主体→“观点+解释(因果)+例证”·(3)结论”的框架展开。

文/刘宝彩/天津

本文英语写作方法,强调通过逻辑清晰、结构严谨的框架提升英语作文质量,尤其适合考试类写作。以下是基于其方法的英语写作核心要点和示例,供参考:

英语写作核心原则‌

‌逻辑先行‌:段落内部和整体结构需有明确的逻辑链条(原因、结果、措施、举例、适当评价等)。通过‌三段论结构:(1)引言·(2)主体→“观点+解释(因果)+例证”·(3)结论”的框架展开。

‌语言简洁无废词废句‌:用精准的逻辑单句化、组句化、暗藏逻辑词语化及其相互组合的多样化句式体现语言能力,通过思维快速组织内容,写作后检查逻辑是否通畅。

以逻辑框架法,写作‌高分“读后续写”英语作文示例如下,有两部分及其需要从两方面下功夫:先看接近25分续写作文;后看续写的原文阅读文;最后在两方面下功夫练习。

一、接近25分续写作文:

With every passing second, my ambition fell apart. This means half a dream of mine is better than nothing. The pain in my muscles did not prevent me from running in the race. It took me 5-second time to go through the pain, which is too severely to run slowly, struggling up the last hill. This discomfort in the beginning, without running temporarily, can save a whole lot of pain of me whose personal“failure”has always strengthened my resolve to make things right in filling the world with sunshine in my mind. This tells all, to grow in hope, I myself need to suffer, without always winning but with backing out of a fight. As is known to me by above, don’t be disappointed if there’s not a pot of gold at the end of the rainbow, having only an ambition in working towards short- or long-term goal. Its fact comes to that I am brought the greatest joy in life to remain the pleasure by being helped with my team.

My team's support encouraged me to move on.

The support among teamers is to lead me to be connected with them heart by heart. It never lets my head hand down, helping me work hard to run throught the finished line continuously in the front of which I fell down at one-meter distance. Its condition changing in speciality inspires me to believe in making every experience so educational and beautiful that I can define myself by my actions meaningfully.

This point, most teamers saw in setting me admirable truely. They find it brave of me to remain better than they think I was, in their view. Without allowing fear to drive me from my purpose, in the end, I will all be judged by the courage of my hearts. As is shown all by above, no one can make me feel inferior without my consent, while even the darkest moment can turn into something sweet. Having been encouraged by my teamers,

I broke the status quo that time and defined myself as I choose. Being deeply loved by them gives me strength, while loving someone deeply gives me courage to takes to grow up. It is nice of me to join the the cross-country running club in doing the 20-kilometer-long running, that brings me to get pleased by encouragement to me by my teamers who let me keep going forward.

二、续写的原文阅读文:

阅读下面材料,根其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段,使之构成一篇完整的短文。

I entered my freshman year of high school with a clear goal: work hard, stick to whatever l could succeed at and graduate with great achievements, I wouldn't waste my time where I didn't perform as strongly. And this belief served me well. My academic standards were high. I was the star player of all the teams I joined, My friends would joke about my pursuit of perfection, but in my eyes, it was the only sure path to success.

In the second term I joined the cross-country running club. When I came to the first practice,I was filled with the desire to make the varsity(校队) team. But as the distance we ran each practice gradually increased from three, to four, to six miles, I realized that no matter how hard I tried, l was one of the slowest on the team. This realization disappointed me. And the pain in the muscles following every practice was unbearable. I wanted to quit! What was the point of putting myself through so much pain and being the slowest racer?

Then we had our first cross-country race. When we got off the bus, the sight of the other teams warming up made my hands sweaty, When we started the race, I felt the enormous pressure of expectations sink onto my shoulders. lt was a challenging course, consisting of a series of winding and rocking hills.

After a while I stopped running and struggled up the last hill. The steps under my feet felt as heavy as thousands of pounds, mirroring the weight of my despair. With every racer passing me, frustration washed over me ---- I would never win honor for my team. l'd just be letting them down.

三、不失分就从两方面下功夫:

第一方面,续写思路

(1)读后续写要求考生要读懂已有信息,要读懂字面含义,还要厘清文章的脉络和关系。续写中,考生要明白故事的发展进程、前因后果、地理位置变化、人物情感等。为此考生顺着文章的思路线索,发挥想象,对情节合理预测用英语表达出来,写作时忌悔使用5个以上给出的提示词。

(2)考生读到适当的位置,可以短暂停顿,根据已读部分文章的脉络,对文章进行发散思维,设想可能的几种结尾;经常作微型化训练,因此对所读文章的某一段落进行设想。根据某一段落的首句提示,结合文章的上文对该段进行合理设想,推断该段要讲述的内容。

(3)写好读后续写英语作文需要使用英语逻辑思维推理,以重点提示观点为中心,左找原因,右找结果,然后使用四种方法推理:一因一果;一因多果;多因一果;多因多果,以扩大观点或主旨表达的有效性、逻辑性和正确性,还要用使用“暗藏”逻辑词语句。

第二方面,续写五步骤

(1)精读文章,确定文章线索。每篇文章都有各自独特的写作思路,通过精读文章,找到该篇文章的写作线索,比如是以时间为线索还是以空间为线索等,这样有利于考生“顺藤摸瓜”。

(2)仔细审题,明确续写要求。一般短文后面的“注意”都有对此短文续写的具体要求,如字数限制、使用几处下划线关键词语、续写段落的首句提示,这样考生能做到“心中有数”。

(3)回到原文,揣摩续写思路。根据文章后面的要求,再次快速回读短文,抓住文章的思路,结合段首的提示句,最终确定续写段落的思路,也要结合文章划线词语提示,确定续写段落的内容。

(4)修改错词病句,结合提示语或者文中划线的关键词语拟写草稿。注意句子结构的多样性、语言的丰富性,并通过句与句之间“暗藏”逻辑词语的正确使用,上下文连贯。

(5)标出续写部分中使用到的原材料中标有下划线的关键词语,因此考生检查关键词语的使用情况并根据情况做出修改。最后誊写文字做到字迹工整清晰。

总结:

写好上述读后续写英语作文需要使用英语逻辑思维推理,以重点提示观点为中心,左找原因,右找结果,然后使用四种方法推理:一因一果;一因多果;多因一果;多因多果,以扩大观点或主旨表达的有效性、逻辑性和正确性,还要用使用“暗藏”逻辑词语句。‌

对读后续写,学生在已知提示篇章内容的条件下,自己再拟定一个下一步的提示点。这个提示点跟前面的内容一定有因果的关系。由上个提示想到下一个内容会推导出什么结果或推论。

操作上可使用逻辑单句及其暗逻辑写成逻辑组句,其中,学生可以通过用“暗”逻辑所对应的英语词法句法形式表达出来,由此便完成读后续写了。

如此显示的优势是:英语作文的内容思想观点鲜明,暗逻辑使用恰当,观点之论据清楚,事实论据和理论论据匹配。是有自己独有的写作想法,不是用模板句空喊口号。所以要作逻辑思维推理,寻原因找结果。

这种“寻因找果”操作是按照“原因←提示观点→结果”思路而写作英语作文的,因此写作者便“有词儿写,有词儿知道怎么写”,达到意思不重复,英文语言表达有新鲜感,大考判(阅)卷老师对此有吸引力,因此有兴趣给考生高分!

续写英语作文范文一般先把结果告诉读者,然后具体描写故事剧情,这里剧情不必过多,更多的是描写剧情发生的原因及其产生后续观点。

如此解决了——读后续写英语作文 对一些考生来说困难 为啥逆袭写到接近满分成绩——之问题了。看来读后续写英语作文可以从得15—20分,写得接近得25满分呢!

编辑语:

《读后续写英语作文 对一些考生来说困难 为啥逆袭写到接近满分成绩呢》一文阐述:写好读后续写英语作文需要使用英语逻辑思维推理,以重点提示观点为中心,左找原因,右找结果,然后使用四种方法推理:一因一果;一因多果;多因一果;多因多果,以扩大观点或主旨表达的有效性、逻辑性和正确性,还要用使用“暗藏”逻辑词语句。

1. 英语写作核心原则:逻辑先行,语言简洁无废词废句。

2. 读后续写英语作文示例:续写作文通过描述作者参加越野赛跑的经历,表达了坚持梦想和团队支持的重要性。

3. 读后续写技巧:读懂已有信息,明确续写要求,结合文章线索和提示句,使用英语逻辑思维推理,以重点提示观点为中心,左找原因,右找结果。

4. 读后续写步骤:精读文章,确定文章线索;仔细审题,明确续写要求;回到原文,揣摩续写思路;修改错词病句,结合提示语或者文中划线的关键词语拟写草稿;标出续写部分中使用到的原材料中标有下划线的关键词语。

来源:原创英语写作范文

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