摘要:这个标题,适应了新高考课标了,本质上说英语作文就是不让抄模板套范文了,咋办?先写一篇新高考课标的如下英语作文, 来回应针对标题:高考生“抄模板套范文”的时代已经一去不复返了!
文/刘宝彩/天津
这个标题,适应了新高考课标了,本质上说英语作文就是不让抄模板套范文了,咋办?先写一篇新高考课标的如下英语作文, 来回应针对标题:高考生“抄模板套范文”的时代已经一去不复返了!
为此按照新高考课标要求考生必须有思维能力、思辨能力和认知能力,需要发现问题或提出问题和解决问题的能力之要求。例如,以“外教设置口语小组,李华觉得不合理,提建议”为题目,写英语作文。此题目要求:让李华给外教写一封邮件,对于外教以抽签两人为一组的分组方式,练习英语口语,表达反对意见。为此本文作者写作英语作文如下。
To: Mr. John, my teacher
Fm: LiHua, one of your students
DD:June. 09, 20--.
I write you this e-mail bringing you with my view on not adopting method as you devised for students to work in pairs who get the English-speaking course taken in spoken English class.
My view in question turns them favourable for helping each of them with success in making them understood in English independently, without being interrupted by his/her partner with any comment, to achieve great fluency in logic-based thought.
For example, an excellent speech is to deliver to the public on running for student-union president or on doing others. This proves them to be successful in advantage to them, without working in pairs, which helps me find it necessary and important to assist students in setting a realistic goal as attained for orally high-level expression.
Its fact comes to that most of them should hold up the former president Obama of the U.S.A. as an example to his presidential campaign speech, inspiring some of them to suggest newly-brilliant ideas for reference to students, greatly to their benefit. Each student has many helpful comments received from their teacher you, of course.
You would like to give each of them scores for their performance, in terms of its level, that avoids making potentially-negative impact on some listeners. They will be enabled to acquire knowledge about their speaker-taken views of point to be put right together with their structures kept clear in grammar and with some speaker-developed arguments perfect in logic followed basically strictly.
The above method has advantage over one for taking English-speaking course practically by means of working in pairs. As seen from above, particularly, their progress in itself present a solid achievement in putting English into practice.
This finds it easy for speakers and/or listeners not only to speak but write English, considerably helpfully, to play great role in use of English by logic-based thinking to do practically. By this, I mean that advantage over-weighs disadvantage in oral English, which is so much interesting to me. Please correct such a mistake as I would made, if any, on the above idea of mine only for reference to you.
Yours sincerely.
从这篇英语作文看出:高考生“抄模板套范文”的时代已经一去不复返了!新课标高考英语作文说到做到,要求考生必须有思维能力、思辨能力和认知能力,需要发现问题或提出问题和解决问题的能力。
对此如果脑子里没有内容,模板摆那儿都不好使了。也就是说,思维认知能力打败背模板范文的努力;甚至打败了会背《英语新概念》就能写英语作文了的努力。为什么英语作文这么难写呢?这不是命题人心血来潮流故意难为考生们,而是考生对于新高考课标的认知和思维思辨之间有差距巨大。为何有如此巨大差距?考生如果看了上述英语作文写作成文的如下中译文,就能知道了新高考课标的内在涵义了。
上述英语邮件作文大意如下。
致:约翰老师
自:李华您的学生
日期:20--年3月19日
我写这封电子邮件,提出关于反对您在英语口语课上用分组方式上英语口语课的意见。与此意见相反不分组有利于帮助每个学生成功地用英语独立地表达自己的意思,而不会被他/她搭档打断讲话人,从而达到逻辑思维上的畅通。
例如,一个出色的演讲者是向公众发表关于学生会主席的竞选或其他的演讲。这证明了不用分组练习演讲,是成功的,我认为有必要也很重要地朝着英语口语高级表达演讲的目标前行。例如奥巴马竞选总统的演讲就是如此,为此启发了一些人提出新的想法,这可供学生参考,使他们受益匪浅。当然,每个人独立表达思想完毕要经过老师点评打分。这样避免学生之间出现不必要的低级错误,而相互受到影响。
这样使得听者获得关于说话人英语口语基本观点达到正确,语法结构保持清晰,逻辑以语法形式表达完整。这要比分组练习口语的优势大大增加。这样会在英语口语方面取得巨大的进步,特别是理论联系实际方面尤其突出。不仅在口语方面有进步,而且在英语写作方面还是有巨大帮助的作用。所以不分组练习英语口语,我认为,利大于弊对我来说是非常感兴趣的。
以上意见,如有不当,请约翰老师指正;仅供老师参考。
敬上。
总结:
从中英文对照看出:光背模板范文,还真的写不出英语作文,还有做国外原版的阅读理解题,考生真的爱莫能助了;因为校内老师大部分光教授学生语法及字面意,这是拿不到分了。
本质上说,这都是因忽视了英语逻辑思维的操作练习、训练和培养——英语是逻辑语言,不是模板语言,逻辑是英语的灵魂—— 之教学核心理念。今后的高考生一定不要“抄模板套范文”了,模板套范文时代已经一去不复返了,因为新高考课标,英语作文就是不让抄模板套范文了,这样有必要立刻从模板范文英语转型为逻辑思维英语!
从上述实操英文作文看出:这篇英语写作是按照“新高考课标,考生必须有思维能力、思辨能力和认知能力,需要发现问题或提出问题和解决问题的能力”之要求而写作的,因此训练、培养和实际操作练习。还有80多天想提高英语作文成绩——避开无形的低分陷阱,才能写作质量优秀得高分的——请考生留言我助你一臂之力。
编辑语:
《英语作文如何避开无形的低分陷阱 才能写作质量优秀得高分呢》一文,阐述:英语作文应注重培养思维能力和逻辑表达,避免过度依赖模板和范文。
1. 新高考课标的要求:强调考生需具备思辨能力和认知能力,能够提出问题并解决问题。
2. 反对不合理的教学方法:学生对以抽签两人一组的分组方式练习口语表达反对意见,主张独立学习。
3. 英语作文的逻辑思维训练:教师应引导学生运用逻辑思维,关注文章的结构和论点的连贯性,而非仅仅依靠模板。
来源:原创英语写作范文