摘要：如今网络上充斥着大量由软件生成的英语文章，这些内容往往缺乏原创性，且因格式混乱而容易识别。此外，也有很多国内学习者自己写的文章，但其中存在大量语言问题，却得不到有效修改。对于尚未掌握语法的同学来说，依赖这些材料学习，反而可能被误导。最近我又在网络上发现了别人写

如今网络上充斥着大量由软件生成的英语文章，这些内容往往缺乏原创性，且因格式混乱而容易识别。此外，也有很多国内学习者自己写的文章，但其中存在大量语言问题，却得不到有效修改。对于尚未掌握语法的同学来说，依赖这些材料学习，反而可能被误导。最近我又在网络上发现了别人写的一句英文，出现了现在分词做状语的严重错误。看看DeepSeek对我的评判。

一，现在分词做状语

现在分词做状语，与状语从句有关。一定要注意主句和从句的主语一致。现在看看由状语从句演变为简单句的过程，即现在分词做状语。

1.When Tom came back, he was very tired.

去掉从句里的引导词和主语，用现在分词做时间状语即可，结果如下。

2.Coming back, Tom was very tired.简单句，Tom是现在分词的逻辑主语。

3.I didn't call Tom because I didn't know his phone number.

去掉从句的引导词和主语，用现在分词做原因状语即可，结果如下。

4.Not knowing his phone number, I didn't call Tom.

简单句，I 是现在分词的逻辑主语。

5.Living in this earthly world, we should have a correct view of ourselves.

根据语境判断，简单句中，现在分词living...做状语，逻辑主语应该是we才是正确的。如果是it，那就违背了主句和从句主语一致的原则。

二，两边主语不一致，独立主格结构做状语

1.If weather permits, we will go to the park.条件状语从句

2.Weather permitting, we will go to the park.现在分词permitting的逻辑主语是weather，不是we

3.Because there were no bus, we took a taxi home.原因状语从句

4.There being no bus, we took a taxi home.现在分词being的逻辑主语是no bus，不是we

三，思考题[微风][烟花]改错

（老师见答题公布答案）

1.The boy sat in the room, did his homework.

2.The old man was ill, we came to visit him.

3.Coming home, his house was found broken into.

4.The skirt cost too little, Mary felt happy.

来源：郑老师KMYYZY