摘要：针对标题，本文回答：如不需要老师，你还需要加倍努力学习英语托福写作基本功及学会英语逻辑思维表达的规则。写作20分说明了基本表达对问题的看法，有可能不十分了解议论文的写作要求，导致答题可能逻辑不清晰。除英语基础好外要学习逻辑单句组句和"暗"逻辑及其表达形式，才能

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针对标题，本文回答：如不需要老师，你还需要加倍努力学习英语托福写作基本功及学会英语逻辑思维表达的规则。写作20分说明了基本表达对问题的看法，有可能不十分了解议论文的写作要求，导致答题可能逻辑不清晰。除英语基础好外要学习逻辑单句组句和"暗"逻辑及其表达形式，才能把托福英语写作从20分左右提升到接近30满分。

也就是说，托福写作得到高分是完全有可能的，所以学生们需要扎实自己的托福英语基础，尤其是逻辑单句和逻辑组句的构成，均用于写作观点句段内，因此作文有逻辑才是最好的。

事实上，考生得到不满意的分数是因为考生缺的不是表现力，而是英语作文写作的三个常规的表达力。所以今天告诉学生写托福英语作文富有英语逻辑思维的三个常规，当你明确了并且会运用它，再不会写也可以做到得高分。这样你写托福英语作文，就写出期待的结果，可试一下你就知道了，表现不够常规来凑。

第一常规，就是你表达主题思想写作的每一个句子时，一定要尽量抓住逻辑思维规定的单句，你来看这一句“The weather has become warmer”，而不是写成“The weather is warmer”来很呆板的句子。那我们在写单句的时候，你要抓住他的强“活力”。

第二常规，就是你在写每个逻辑单句（如三个句1. Spring draws near. 2.the weather has become warmer. 3.That inspires quite a few people to go out of houses for sunshine.）的之间，一定要明确有“换气的气口”就是上下句有一个逻辑联系的“把手”，例如：Spring drawing near, the weather has become warmer. That inspires quite a few people to go out of houses for sunshine.的组句：其中之一Spring drawing near独立主格被看做“把手（…drawing…）”表达为“因为（春天）来临”；其中之二，That…表达“所以”之意。当然了，多数情况下基本上是一句一个气口，体会一下把这三句连起来，你就成功写出了一个英语逻辑组句了，所以绝对没有“逻辑跳空缺口”

这气口你在练习写英语作文的时候一定要明确，不能可有可无啊，不能这边写作的有，那边写的就没有，这样情况下你的“气口”的惯性就容易乱。

写作句子如稍微长一点点，所以你要控制好自己的气息，也可以临时加上一个“气口”，我说的临时加气口并不是随意加，而是有控制的直接把一个逻辑句能顺利地连接到你的下一个句子的逻辑位置上。

第三常规，就是在英语作文写作时，我们往往要在逻辑组句中加一些“装饰”词或短语，或者组句本身就有，那你在写作的时候要把它与你所加的装饰，必须匹配。不要"吃意思”，也就是中间不要阻思维断含义，正因为有了这些个小装饰，才显得这篇作文儿非常的优美，例如：Enabled to develop physically, she is in good health, being full of highly spirit in doing something she could difficultly. 因此你绝对不要把装饰省略掉，或者在写组句的时候想写却没有表现出来，要把它写全，否则自己写着不舒服，别人看着也不好看，就因为这些细节没有做到。

你再体会一下，把这三个常规都做进去：1逻辑思维规定的单句；2每个逻辑单句之间有“换气的气口”；3逻辑组句中加一些“装饰”词或短语。

为证实上述英语写作的常规，给你写一篇托福英语思维作文如下：

Having a lot learned during a lesson class by teaching as known to most people, some students or teachers are loath to get this teaching method used in traditionally-teaching way.

As indicated in the way, Learning by listening only gives passive input to students, which is seen as useless or ineffective by people. In comparison to this, learning by discussing and teaching is regarded as active input, which will be effectually helpful to the students, who do activities with lesson-class study to meet their desires to have method changed from passive input to active input by which to apply the knowledge completely they acquired.

By the passive input, two years ago, I mean I had lessons received to get very low scores during the pandemic-hitting period, which extremely made me look morose and distressed. In compliance with this, I hold expectation of quite a common occurrence in students, but, fortunately, my friend and acquaintance advised me to learn by its discussing, which methodology is called the well-known Feynman Technique admitted by an abundance of the professors.

I just had its approach used according to my friend, helping me acquire the knowledge internally by following logic, to get my effectively-learning wish fulfilled successfully by taking up the methodological study.

A small number of people, the adolescents in school, can follow the teachers in realizing how they come to learn all in principle during a lesson class. That is to say most students do need the guidance with which to help them. For example, in comparison to this, seminars and/or discussions will turn more effectively favourable to university students, in my view.

In conclusion, I highly became exposed to the way how students can more effectively have knowledge of lesson taken by its teaching and discussing, that is positively perceptible to me.

上述英语作文是依据以下条件写的

Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?

It is typical that teachers lecture or lead the discussions and students listen and take notes for the most of the time of a class. There is a better way that teachers organize student-led discussions and project-based learning, and can give help when students need it.

总结：

看到以上三个规矩及其英语托福写作，那你觉得英语作文写得优美吗？你现在在练习某一主题写作，把今天讲的这三个常规运用上，它一定会让你的英语托福写作富有表现力。当然，让写英语富有表现力和这三个常规应用上，也需要你的英语词法和句法的语法、思维及其思想从不同角度表达的几个方面的综合运用。

那如果你在写作英语方面还欠缺基础，又不想花费太多的时间，那么我从托福英语作文写作的主题观点运用、英语逻辑思维写作及其表达形式，和写作思想上的推理和情感表达。通过上1次课（2个小时）一站式为你打下一个良好的写作托福英语思维作文的基本功，让你的英语作文写得更轻松，使自己的英语作文更好地吸引读者。这源于托福写作高分规矩凑，爽了！优秀英语托福作文写得快，具体需求请留言我助你一臂之力得高分。也可以帮助学生修改英语作文。如此满足——“英语作文托福写作20分左右 需要请老师吗——要求。

来源：原创英语写作范文