摘要:怎么懂得英语写作规矩才能让判卷老师眼睛亮冒金光给高分?辅助方式:找原因、找结果、找措施,写英语议论文写作更有感染力。该方法包括审题找出提示句因果关系汇总内容等步骤,避免高三生的抓瞎着急。所以用英语逻辑思维写作英语作文才能改变“思辨缺席症”和“套作式”思维,了解
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怎么懂得英语写作规矩才能让判卷老师眼睛亮冒金光给高分?辅助方式:找原因、找结果、找措施,写英语议论文写作更有感染力。该方法包括审题找出提示句因果关系汇总内容等步骤,避免高三生的抓瞎着急。所以用英语逻辑思维写作英语作文才能改变“思辨缺席症”和“套作式”思维,了解判卷老师给高分标准。先看得高分的英语思维写英语作文如下,后看用英文单词来表达出有中文思维的英文作文。
一、得高分的英语思维写英语作文
Dear Mr.Johnson,General Manager,
I write you an e-mail expressing my dissatisfaction over the products quality about your washing-machine, which was bought in your shopping mall two weeks ago. The machine is found leaky after its use at three-day time.
Since your customers service center promises, by my having made phone call to it, that your after-sale service specialist would be at home of mine, this encouraging beginning. That has declined to such an extent that the specialist has not come to my house, until I write you now, to get me out of this difficulty in having the broken machine of mine repaired as soon as quickly.
To have your good reputation enjoyed by a little more than customers, I sincerely consider, you should not put me one of your customers in such an embarrassing position that your words are not matched by your deeds. That is to say, to my deep disappointment to you, you are doing little to justify my confidence in you most satisfactorily.
I should like to know how it is that the solution to the washing-machine problem would be successful with inferior quality to be improved or dealt with reasonably.
I should also like to know what steps you are taking to remedy the present situation and meet my requirements for this in terms of two suggestions offered to you as follows.
They are depending on two ways: one is to respond to my renewed request for you to send your service specialist to check or repair the broken machine on spot at home of mine within two-days time, the other is to ask you to repay the full money, the proceeds, of your machine I bought, if any, in default of repairing accordingly in specified time as above mentioned.
Yours faithfully,
One of your customers
Ms. AAA
这篇英语作文得到的启示是:
英语作文,通过融合“内容、逻辑、语法(暗逻辑思维)”三位一体及其四种形式而完成写作。这四种形式为“一表、三图、四方法、六优化”,其涵义是:
㈠一表→英语词语搭配规则表;
㈡三图→⑴英语逻辑写作思路图、⑵递进式英语逻辑写作图、⑶英语逻辑写作操作四步骤图;
㈢四方法→⑴一因一果、⑵一因多果、⑶多因一果、⑷多因多果;
㈣六优化→融合于逻辑思维中的6类英语变形语句。
用三位一体及其四种形式,写出带有逻辑思维的英语作文,特别是带有暗逻辑思维的英语作文,对学生来说,具有现实的意义是非常巨大的。
二、用英文单词来表达出有中文思维的英文作文如下。
Dear Mr.Johnson
Hello, this is customer Xiao Wang speaking. l bought a washing machine at your house two weeks ago, but after only using it for three days, the washing machine leaked
I have called the maintenance center of the shopping mall, and I have communicated with the maintenance workers. They promised to come to my home to repair the washing machine, but they have not come yet.
I'm disappointed with your family's attitude and I want to deal with it properly.
I have two suggestions. We can negotiate a suitable time for on-site maintenance. If the repair is troublesome, I also agree with a full refund.
总结:
英语相互转换法、逻辑与语法沟通设计法、逻辑与词法沟通法、逻辑与“基本动词与变形句”沟通组合法、学用英语指南图法、明逻辑暗逻辑使用法助考生写好英语写作。考生打开思路的表达形式:以提示点的句子为中心,左找原因,右找结果。因此达到结构完整、叙述清晰、细节和过渡得当。这样着手准备英语逻辑思维作文,才能救大考学生写作成功表达得高分!
编辑语:
《英语逻辑思维作文怎么着手准备才能救大考生写作成功表达的高分》一文阐述:写英语作文时,考生可以通过运用英语逻辑思维,从因果关系等多个角度进行分析,以提升作文质量获得高分。
1. 英语思维的运用:考生需要理解并运用英语的写作规则,包括因果关系、逻辑连贯,以提高作文的质量和可读性。
2. 写作方法的实践:考生可以通过审题、找出因果关系、总结内容等方法,来提升自己的写作能力。
3. 避免中文思维的影响:考生需要避免用中文思维来写英语作文,而是要学会用英语逻辑思维表达自己的观点想法。
4. 对考生的启示:考生可以通过融合“内容、逻辑、语法”三位一体及其四种形式而完成写作。
来源:原创英语写作范文