摘要：浇水浇在根上，帮扶帮在“用”上。写出英语文：学用结合某一主题让英语思维绽放“桃红柳绿”之花盛开，用英语思维写作英语的阳光会照亮优秀英语写作高分之路。为此写作一篇英语作文，其背景提示如下：

文/刘宝彩/天津

浇水浇在根上，帮扶帮在“用”上。写出英语文：学用结合某一主题让英语思维绽放“桃红柳绿”之花盛开，用英语思维写作英语的阳光会照亮优秀英语写作高分之路。为此写作一篇英语作文，其背景提示如下：

李津同学的国外交换生Jessica，在观看北京第24届世界冬奥运会电视直播时，看到李津作为冬奥志愿服务者，就发来邮件祝贺李津完美作好志愿工作，并说也想以后当奥运会志愿者便寻问有关的情况。为此请你以李津名义给Jessica用英语写一封回复邮件表达：当冬奥志愿者的心情及为中外宾客服务感到骄傲和自豪而得到的感受或收获……

Dear Jessica，

I thank you so much for your E-mail asking me to tell you about the information on voluntary-service work, which is centrally concerned with Beijing 2022’s Olympic Winter Game（BOWG）, and congratulating me on total sincerity proving for the part I as one of volunteers have played in the success.

This helps me to be pleased at BOWG, sharing a joy at happiness with which I was filled in offering voluntary service to word-wide guests successfully. That has me work hard at staying true to my voluntary-service promise completely.

Enabled to learn how to build up a harmonious and friendly relationship between people from countries, I become more respectfully, morally, socially responsible. This needs to be skilled in communicating well with one another in English. Thinking about this, mentally, I begin making a list of things I would do hour by hour, day by day.

The voluntary service makes me see a sense in my dream to come true, remaining full of spirit with people held in great affection, in mutual assistance, and with efforts made on performing my duty towards BOWG.

These well-doing ideas are to put into practice by means of doing the voluntary-service work excellently, which brings enjoyment to me in learning a lot from other’s volunteers whose well-behaved action gets me impressed excitedly. This encourages me to achieve an intellectual and spiritual growth in individual and social value, in my cooperation with others volunteers.

One, whose Olympic-game spirit together with its mission is set in mind, remains true with the original aspiration. That inspires me to be one of its excellent volunteers, who help make BOWG extremely great.

They let those in need feel it convenient, comfortable and warm to them to live in the Olympic Village by working hard at offering them service patiently, carefully and kindly in volunteers' time, knowledge and skills or talents, together with strong physics. These, as one of volunteers I am all really excellently proud of doing in the host country, China, where to tell viewers something about the true-glory greatness of its ancient history and of contemporary- and modern-culture civilization as human created genuinely.

The civilization is set in great hope and dream, I feel, which turns the host country favourable for becoming strongly intellectual and keeping highly intelligent to Beijing 2022’s Olympic Winter Game at present.

The above serves as a useful or helpful point of reference in bringing you to be one of volunteers hopefully in the coming Olympic game.

Yours Truly,

Lijin, one of your classmates

上述英语作文可以看出：

当志愿者可以学到如何建立友好关系，增强沟通能力，友爱互助履行责任的能力；志愿者在相互学习与合作时体会个人和社会价值中，个人智力和精神得到成长，向需要帮助的中外宾客尽最大努力以耐心、细心和善心提供服务，以让其便利、舒适和温暖地生活在奥运村。感想是当志愿者很自豪并告诉观众主办国历史和文化的文明。

总结：

找出英语作文主题原因结果和措施四部分，用“2原因←1主题→3结果→4措施”形式五类逻辑表达。上述英语文让读者认识到：思维与英语语言交际能力有意识地结合，达到中外文化交际之需要。通过实例英语写作，理解所写文章特定观点、扩大思考的幅度、扩展文本的语境，使英语写作联系和运用让学生把理解、扩展的思想用于写作实践，让学生对语言形式、观点和内容，“三位一体”，使得思考和逻辑及语法具体化了，带动学生英语写作技能提升。

英语逻辑思维写英语让判卷老师给高分，丢掉低分“辛苦分面子分”，用英语逻辑思维四方法：一因一果、多因一果、一因多果、多因多果。如此学生写出优秀英语作文，让英语思维绽放出的“桃红柳绿”之花盛开，所以学生自然得高分！甚至还要得满分！这样英语作文写得优秀才能融合中国文化优质得高分。

编辑语：

《英语作文怎么写得优秀才能融合中国优质文化故事的高分？》一文阐述：浇水浇在根上，帮扶帮在“用”上。英语作文要达到高分，需要学用结合，以英语思维来写作，并结合中国优质文化故事，这样才能让英语思维绽放出的“桃红柳绿”之花盛开。

1. 学用结合的重要性：学习英语并运用到实际写作中，结合中国文化，能提升英语写作的质量。

2. 以英语思维写作：用英语思维来写作，能让文章更地道，更流畅，更易于理解。

3. 结合中国优质文化：在英语写作中结合中国优质文化，能增加文章的深度和广度，使文章更富有文化内涵。

4. 实践与应用：通过实际写作练习，不断运用英语思维和中国文化，才能真正提高英语写作能力。

来源：原创英语写作范文