摘要：准确使用名词、代词和介词，是英语学习者的基本功。死记硬背范文或许能避免出错，但这本身毫无价值。而在需要自主创作的英语写作中（其错误极具纠错价值)，许多人往往漏洞百出，尤其是在代词的单复数和介词搭配上。例如：“many”后面能接形容词性物主代词吗？“work”是

准确使用名词、代词和介词，是英语学习者的基本功。死记硬背范文或许能避免出错，但这本身毫无价值。而在需要自主创作的英语写作中（其错误极具纠错价值)，许多人往往漏洞百出，尤其是在代词的单复数和介词搭配上。例如：“many”后面能接形容词性物主代词吗？“work”是可数名词吗？诸如此类的问题长期困扰着广大学习者。今天我们要分析的这篇原创英文，其中就包含了相关的典型错误。先看原文，你能发现几个问题？

一，发现问题

DeepSeek对我的判断

二，分析问题并修改

（一）study本身有“书房”之意，可以删除room。

I started to tidy her study.

我开始整理她的书房。

（二）数词和代词不能接形容词性物主代词，但是可以用of连接。

1.Few of my friends went there.

我的朋友没有几个去那儿。

2.Ten of his classmates arrived here.

他的十个同班同学都来这里了。

3.Many of her brother's books piled up and filled the whole lower part of the closet.

她哥哥的许多书都堆在这里，装满了整个柜子的整个下面部分。

4.Many of Yuanyuan's junior middle school books had to be classified and put into the closets.

园园的许多初中书籍不得不分类，放入书柜中。

（三）根据上文，可以判断，各种书包括...应该用主格代词的复数形式，并且用过去式。

They consisted of not only his senior high school books but also those of his college.

这些书不仅包括他高中的书籍还有大学的书。

（四）副词out不能接宾语，必须加介词of，才可以接宾语。useless是形容词，后面接名词(用one代替书)

I pushed them all out of the closet and disposed of those useless ones.

（五）work工作，不可数名词，job 工作，可是名词。

It's really exhausting to handle those jobs.

干完这些工作确实令人很累。

（六）only和alone重复了，用一个即可。pile在这里是及物动词，最好用被动语态。

Only her test papers were piled up to a height of one metre high.

唯她的试卷就堆了一米高了。

（七）accomplishment 成就，不是人。这里的“成就”也不大，因此，有成就感，就行。

But the feeling of its tidiness gave me a sense of accomplishment.

整理书房的感觉给了我一种成就感。

根据语境，优化词汇和语法，我最后修改版本如下

I started to tidy her study. So many of her brother's books piled up and filled the whole lower part of the closet. It consisted of not only his senior high school books but also those of his college. These books are thick and heavy.I pushed them all out of the closet and disposed of those useless ones. It's really exhausting to handle those jobs. So many of Yuanyuan's junior middle school books had to be classified and put into the closets. Only her test papers were piled to a height of one metre. It took me a whole day to complete the study cleaning. But the feeling of its tidiness gave me a sense of accomplishment.

思考题[微风][烟花]有错就改。

1.I have a number of work every day.

2.Two hundred of them took part in the activity last week.

4.The boy ran out the classroom quickly.

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