摘要:许多英语学习者难以准确运用情态动词“should ”,其根源在于治学方法本末倒置:他们盲目背诵范文,或沉溺于在选择题中寻找答案,未能真正调动思维,去构建句子、内化语法。这种缺乏创造性输出的学习,导致其在写作中漏洞百出。今日阅读一篇文章的时候,我观察到作者不仅严
许多英语学习者难以准确运用情态动词“should ”,其根源在于治学方法本末倒置:他们盲目背诵范文,或沉溺于在选择题中寻找答案,未能真正调动思维,去构建句子、内化语法。这种缺乏创造性输出的学习,导致其在写作中漏洞百出。今日阅读一篇文章的时候,我观察到作者不仅严重误用了情态动词,全文还存在其它多处瑕疵。先看看原文吧,不要看我的答案,看看你能发现几个问题。后面有思考题[微风][烟花]
一,发现问题
二,分析问题并修改
(一)缺介词in
很明显,在老家和深圳下大雨,介词短语做地点状语。
It rained a lot in both my hometown and Shenzhen.
(二)情态动词should的具体用法
①should do 现在应该做某事, 还没有发生。
②should have done 过去应该做某事,已发生
1.You should get up now. Come on!
你应该起床了。快点。
2.I should have studied for the exam last night, but I watched the football match.
根据语境,原文这句应该这样修改
Yesterday I should have picked up the chicken I had ordered.[微风][烟花]
(三)book和order的区别
预订商品,食物,订餐一般用order,
预订各种服务用book
1.order the food(mobile phone, books)
2.book the room(a table, flight)
3.Yesterday I should have picked up the chicken I had ordered.[微风][烟花]
昨天我应该去拿我之前预订的鸡肉。
(四)把it 改成some chicken。如果是it,就是买那块鸡肉了。
1.Originally I intended to go to the place to buy some chicken this morning...
2.There are some good dictionaries in the bookshop. Would you like to buy one?书店里有一些好的词典,你想不想买一本?
3.There is only one good dictionary in the bookshop. Would you like to buy it?书店里只有一本好的词典,你想不想把它买下来?
(五)三顿饭一般不要冠词
What would you like to eat for breakfast? (不要冠词)I didn't have breakfast this morning, so I would like to eat a big lunch.(有形容词限定的时候就用冠词)我最后的修改版本如下
Yesterday I came to Nanshan.Recently it rained a lot in both myhometown and Shenzhen. . . . If not for this rain, I had planned to walk to Baoan in the early morning. Yesterday I should have picked up the chicken I had ordered, but this sudden Nanshan episode made it impossible. Originally I intended to go to the place to buy some chicken this morning as I am reluctant to break my promise.
I cooked some noodles for breakfast.
三,总结
下面是DeepSeek对我的判断
思考题[微风][烟花]
1.They have been swimming _ten o'clock this morning.(介词)
2.All my flowers have died. I should ___(water) them the other day.
3.Have you ____(预订) a tablel?
4.I have bread and an egg for __breakfast.(a, an, the, /)
5.I ordered some chicken, but I forgot to get ___because of the heavy rain.(it, one)
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